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Don't Kill Me WIP by Vizen Don't Kill Me WIP by Vizen
Hum. I'm afraid Lulabelle72 will again say something here...XD

Warning : This is a WIP. I edited it in my main gallery because of the faves (Merci!!!), but it's not finished.
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:iconpatolozka:
Patolozka Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Itīs great. I donīt think about it as WIP;-)
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droxy Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it. Gloved hands, very nice.
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:iconvizen:
Vizen Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008
Oh yes, an old project now... *sight*
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Runya-EithelNar Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2008
Nooo! Dumb, don't kill him! O.o
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Vizen Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008
Ahah :)

old project... I should finish this one actually ! :(
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pattrusky Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2008
woah! that scene is from the book? maybe when Dumbledore finds out that Snape had told Voldemort about the prophecy?

Snape looks so helpless and vulnerable. He's an excellent wizard but he can't attack his beloved friend. :heart: he's such a man of honour!
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Vizen Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008
It's in the Prince's tale chapter - when he's young and waiting for Dumbledore - in order to ask for help, wanting to save Lily :)
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Veronica-Art Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2008  Professional General Artist
Aww this scene is magnificent! You`ve overdone yourself!
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:iconvizen:
Vizen Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008
Unfinished project again :( well... Someday...

Thank you Lily :)

Your own illustration of the scene is fantastic, honestly.
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Veronica-Art Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008  Professional General Artist
I think this is better!!! Honest! :nod:
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e-c-h Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2008  Professional General Artist
great emotional capture of the scene!
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:iconvizen:
Vizen Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008
Thank you Sayu. Still unfinished, you see :)
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e-c-h Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008  Professional General Artist
but lookin good :D
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misia123 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
Dumbledore, the evil puppet-master, bleh!
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:iconvizen:
Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
:love:
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:iconlamaitza:
lamaitza Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
I like the subtle light, and Sev's pose, although his expression makes you think for a second that he's the aggressor at first.
anyway, i like it! :D
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:iconvizen:
Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
Thanks ! Yeah, I'll change that.

;)
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:iconlamaitza:
lamaitza Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
glad to be of help :smooch:
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:iconjoeyv7:
joeyv7 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
I hope I'm watching your scraps then - I know I am. Great powerful face & gesture. If you think it's innapropriate for this scene, you could use this Snape in a different setting. I don't think it's totally unreasonable for him to look furious at some point in this scene though . . .
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Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
Well, you know, as I told Lulabelle72 - I believe he's feared but his determination is the main feeling here. After all, he came to Dumbledore...This 'Don't kill me' shout ... He thought Dumbledore could kill without warning, but he's resolved to speak about Lily first. After all, he's only 20-years-old, and he had enough bravery for this encounter. For me, he's a foolish and desesperate soul, looking only to his goal. It's enough for being not essentially feared, but also aggressive somehow.

You're right. I can use this one in another pic. I certainly will.
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joeyv7 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
Yeah, I especially like the simplicity of the mouth, very effective. I always have a bunch of tentative lines around my mouths :D
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Expell-HUN Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
maybe you should direct some of the rays onto Snape's face and shoulder, too, not only behind him, hm? I agree that he is too powerful and strong in mind here comparing to the JKR canon, but well, this is one interpretation, right? ;-)
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:iconvizen:
Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
;)

I'll modify the lightings, sure. The expression, maybe... :)
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Leslie33 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
I happen to like it, especially the red in his eyes like he's been weeping.
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:iconvizen:
Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
:) ;)
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lulabelle72 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
I will agree with the others about the light. Severus looks more powerful than defeated. He should be absolutely pathetic here. On the other hand...

Yeah. I'd shag him. He looks so elegant! Look at that upraised arm! Those cheekbones that could cut glass! *sigh*

Oh, Vizen. You love him too much, and it shows in every brush stroke.
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Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
I hesitate about his expression here. In the book, he's clearly feared. Knowing the character, he's certainly more determined than feared - I mean, he doesn't want to die. But he doesn't want to die just because he wants to save Lily before. So I thought that in this moment he will be desperate but firmly shouting to Dumbledore.

But with the hand it's too much - indeed it's not clear that he is weaker here.

And you know, he's really too handsome lol. A pity. :love:

I'll change it. :psychotic:
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TomScribble Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
He looks rather as if the light is coming from his hand,s as if he is magically keeping away Dumbledore, rather trying to protect himself.
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:iconvizen:
Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
Ok, I am trying to check it ... Could you have a look to the links in my message to :icontanebetthu: please and give me your opinion about this problem ???? :) merci :heart:
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TomScribble Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
I had a look - for me it's not so much the shading, it's the general posture and facial expression that conveys those feelings. The one with the least extra light is probably my favourite, though.
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Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
I believe that when he shouts this 'don't kill me', is above all determinated to stop Dumbledore. But anyway his face is wrong here : too strong and not enough snapish. I'll change it. Thank you once more :)
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TomScribble Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
you're welcome! :hug: I hope you don't mind a well-meant crit every now and then. I always feel like a bully when I say things like that...
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:iconvizen:
Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
you know if I put it in the scrapbook, it's because I'm perplexed about it and I wish have some help :)
So thank you, I'm only grateful :)
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TaNebetThu Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
:wow: Magnifique! (Décidemment, tu ne chômes pas ces jours-ci! :D)
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:iconvizen:
Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
ah bah ça va mieux alors. ça me redonne un peu de nerfs :)

Tu me donnes ton avis sur cette histoire de lumière au centre (voir posts joints ci-dessus) ???

Voici deux autres versions : dis-moi donc ton avis éclairé et éclairant please ma Chère! )

Number 1
[link]
Number 2
[link]
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:icontanebetthu:
TaNebetThu Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
J'aime bien la version que tu as téléchargée ici, mais au niveau de la "logique", c'est bien vrai que la lumière émanant de la baguette magique de Dumbledore devrait éclairer Séverus de face... Pour l'instant, on a plutôt l'impression que la lueur vient de derrière sa main ou de l'horizon. :plotting: Petit conseil: Essaie donc le "lens flare" dans les "lighting filters" et mets le centre du "flash" sur la baguette magique de Dumbledore... Tu verras que cela ne fait presque pas de travail et donnera probablement l'effet désiré. :)
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Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
Je connais la lens flare mais c'est trop compliqué à ajuster pour moi (des fois c'est trop sombre des fois pas assez etc, et en plus ça m'efface les traits sur le visage de Sev, etc. ) donc j'ai préféré la bonne vieille méthode sans filtre...

Ce que je peux essayer de faire, c'est de remettre du blanc vers la tête de Sev.

Bon, esthétiquement, je trouve ça mieux comme c'est déjà. Mais si c'est mauvais au niveau de l'interprétation, beh ça va pas. Alors tu préfères la version du haut et non pas les deux autres ?
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:icontanebetthu:
TaNebetThu Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
J'ai essayé en vitesse: [link]

Ou alors carrément en ajoutant un effet de spot bleu: [link]

Mais sinon, je préfère en effet la version publiée. :)
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Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
C'est pas mal en fait, l'idée de mettre vraiment un flash au centre. Je vais bosser dessus. Merci sérieusement.

Le site ne marche pas vraiment j'ai l'impression. Il me manque des favourites (je mets en fave et DA ne les enregistre pas, je dois recommencer), et en plus cette deviation n'apparait pas en frontpage. Bon...
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TaNebetThu Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
Mais de rien... :smooch:
Pour la frontpage, je ne sais pas, mais pour les :+fav:, il faut depuis peu cliquer "Everything" dans tes favoris pour les voir tous... On se demande à quoi bon. :shrug: Ce qui me désaspère par contre, c'est quand la fonction de recherche n'est pas mise à jour pendant une semaine... Sans ma dose quotidienne de fanarts de Snape je ressemble à ceci: :fear:
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Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
Nan, justement, j'étais en train de remettre tous les "everything" into tous les favouris, comme je fais régulièrement parce que bon (c'est franchement énervant ces favoris au milieu des favoris, hein ?), et du coup, j'ai remarqué que mes faves du jour avaient pas été imprimées dedans. C'est chiant - je sais plus où je les avais prises, tiens. :steaming:

Bref, ça buggait. Et pour ce dessin, je veux pas le laisser parmi les finis mais j'ose pas le supprimer de la main gallery - j'ai peur de le supprimer complètement du coup, alors qu'il y a quelques faves dessus en plus.

Enfin bon, les misères de DA :)


ah ouaip, ça m'énerve bien aussi, la non mise à jour :steaming:
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LindaSnape Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008   Writer
I like this one. Although, I like a lot of your work. It's very lovely and I believe touching. Though, I have to say the light behind Severus' hand makes it appear to me as if he's powerful or something. Still very nice work. :glomp: :D
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Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
Err. The light comes from Dumbledore's wand, and Severus is on the ground. But maybe you're right here, it's not enough clear.... :confused:
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LindaSnape Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008   Writer
I figured that, dear. I was just saying. Still very nice. :)
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:iconvizen:
Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
No problem. You can watch two different versions of it in the post to :icontanebetthu: and give me your opinion !!!! :)
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LindaSnape Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008   Writer
Aw, okey dokey. I like giving my opinion. :XD: Especially if it's appreciated. :)
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:iconvizen:
Vizen Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008
You're welcome of course! :)
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LindaSnape Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2008   Writer
:)
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