I Have a Problem, Severus

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'I have a problem, Severus.' said Voldemort softly.

'My Lord?' said Snape.

Voldemort raised the Elder Wand, holding it as delicately and precisely as a conductor's baton.

'Why doesn't it work for me, Severus ?'

(...)


'I have thought long and hard, Severus...do you know why I have called you back from the battle ?'

And for a moment Harry saw Snape's profile : his eyes were fixed upon the coiling snake in its enchanted cage.

'No, my Lord, but I beg you will let me return. Let me find Potter.'


In DH32, by JKR
© JKR



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This was a WIP but honestly I don't want to touch it anymore. At least for the moment. And I won't let it in my scraps for centuries again.
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And :

I have some critics about a few things in the books. But IMO this scene was really brilliant.


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EDIT
I slightly attenuated the ghostly effect finally. You can find the original file in my scrapbook, here : [link]